Wednesday, April 15, 2009

Last Breath

So I guess I'll start with my discussion on here. I didn't realize that this story was this short...I wasn't trying to pick the shorter one. But anyway, I really disliked this story. The whole plot was just weird and at the end when the woman died, I really wanted to know what she heard from the Carrie Mayfield jar that made her act so disoriented. Did anyone else feel this way? I just felt like explaining what she heard would have given more insight and more understanding for the story. Overall, just wasn't my favorite.

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  1. Yeah, I was upset that we never found out what was up with the sound in the jar as well. It left too much out.

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